i cant submit deviations......and i have two new chapters of rise to your demise written....ill stick em up here for now....i dont want to scrap it so.....
Chapter III Naratikos
You fall to the ground and are knocked unconscious. After a while you awake to find yourself staring up into a night sky, not unlike your own in all but one detail, the stars. The stars twinkling down at you were a mix of colors, red, orange, blue, everything and you could not seem to divert your gaze from their glory. Suddenly you see something move on the edge of your vision and turn your head to look. A stout man is standing there next to you and looks concerned. He notices you look at him and speaks.
“Are you alright son?” he doesn’t sound as concerned as he looks, but his voice was deep and hypnotic. You shiver and he speaks again “Come with me, I have a place you can stay.
“Thank you sir, but, please, call me Jeff”
“Alright Jeff, I'm Mr. Cramer.” He reaches a hand out towards you “Need a hand?”
“Thanks” you take it and he helps you up.
“So how’d you end up here?” as he speaks you start walking.
“It’s a long story. What is this place anyway?”
“Make ya a deal.” He says, with a smile on his face “you tell me how you got here and I’ll tell you where here is.”
“Done” you say “You first”
“Not a chance, I asked you first.”
“Fine” you tell him your story and he laughs when you finish. “Now you have to tell me what this place is.”
“I’ll get to it in time, but now we have arrived.” He swings his hand at a ratty old shack that looked as if it has only one room. You gape at it in surprise and he apparently sees your reaction. “ It is much bigger on the inside, come”
“O…k…” you speak unsurely as you follow him up to the front door. He unlocks the door slowly and finally opens it. When your eyes fall upon the interior you gasp in surprise and your jaw drops. You’re standing at the front door of a mansion the size of a one-room shack.
“Saves space, everyone lives in these now. Have for a while, since about 2020”
“Is this earth then?” You anticipate finally getting your question answered.
“Yes…and no, you see that’s another thing that’s changed over the last few hundred years” he coughed before continuing “you see, after the development of mini-house over 200 years ago, we decided to develop a new name, feeling that “earth” was old fashioned. We came up with Naratikos.”
“Ok, but how do I get back, this place is a dump” then you add hastily “no offence.”
“None taken, but you cant leave without that spell book, do you still have it?”
“I might” you check all your pockets and find it in your back pocket, although you had never put it there, and hold it up. “Here”
“Wonderful, now…” he gives you a list of instructions and a bag of things you will need to cast a return spell.

Chapter IV Recasting
“This must be done alone” he had told you “If I am there the spell will backfire. I’ll tell you now what to do, perform the same spell again, you should be back.”
“But what if I’m not back home?” you had asked, trying to sound scared, but truly being a bit cocky.
“You wont” he replied angrily, obviously having sensed my cockiness.
“Fine” you had said and walked calmly from the room. You walked up to the room he specified and began to set up the spell. You preformed I exactly as before and it seemed nothing had gone wrong…until you reached your destination.