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You walked away
When I was sad
You made me cry
Too many times
I tried to forgive you
I tried to make you see
But I guess we just
Aren’t meant to be
I would never betray you
You don’t know its true
And you don’t listen
When I speak to you
But I've made my decision
I won’t change my mind
This is more of your loss
Than it is of mine
Because I have to say
Goodbye
©2004-2009 ~Poetic-Pyro
:iconpoetic-pyro:

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a poem i wrote at the beginning of 7th grade (this year) because i had no other ways to express myself...this is also my first poem

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:iconcalmb4thestorm:
aww... sad... pretty good for a first poem though...

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Seeing is believing...
And I don't see you.

Parting is such sweet sorrow...
That it's almost sex flavored!

Member of ~Soul-Essence
:iconmulan775:
..Nice poem.
I love it...it's sad, but it's life right?
Great 1st poem...
:iconpoetic-pyro:
thnaks so much for the +fav! i dont really think its that good...but beauty is in the eye of the beholder, right?

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Hey megalomaniac
You're no Jesus
Yeah, you're no fucking Elvis
Special, as you know yourself
Baby, just step down, step down

I am Anti-Bush, Anti-war, and Anti-megalomaniac!!

[link] join DA dorks R' us!
:iconpoetic-pyro:
thanks, it is sort of sad and i wrote it after my boyfriend thought i had been cheating but i hadnt, i showed it to him and we made up, so it served its purposes i guess, seems like sometimes the sadest things can pass into times of joy like that. *shrugs*

--
Hey megalomaniac
You're no Jesus
Yeah, you're no fucking Elvis
Special, as you know yourself
Baby, just step down, step down

I am Anti-Bush, Anti-war, and Anti-megalomaniac!!

[link] join DA dorks R' us!
:iconcalmb4thestorm:
:w00t:

--
Seeing is believing...
And I don't see you.

Parting is such sweet sorrow...
That it's almost sex flavored!

Member of ~Soul-Essence
:iconpoetic-pyro:
thanks for the enthusiasm...i think lol

--
Hey megalomaniac
You're no Jesus
Yeah, you're no fucking Elvis
Special, as you know yourself
Baby, just step down, step down

I am Anti-Bush, Anti-war, and Anti-megalomaniac!!

[link] join DA dorks R' us!
:iconcalmb4thestorm:
lol

--
Seeing is believing...
And I don't see you.

Parting is such sweet sorrow...
That it's almost sex flavored!

Member of ~Soul-Essence
:iconcontrafool:
Nice poem. It carries a lot of what I like to call power with it. It builds up to a nice clima and just lets the reader have it. Great write, --Erik

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I am in love with her. [link]
:iconpoetic-pyro:
thanks dude (you dont mind me calling u that do u?...lol) and thanks for the devwatch!

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Hey megalomaniac
You're no Jesus
Yeah, you're no fucking Elvis
Special, as you know yourself
Baby, ju ogst step down, step down

I am Anti-Bush and Anti-War, Vote him out of office!

[link] join DA dorks R' us!
[link] Deftones fan? check it out!

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